I drew myself, what do you guys and gals think?

Discussion in 'GBAtemp Art Studio' started by Gyrobax, Jan 3, 2017.

  1. Gyrobax
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    Member Gyrobax GBAtemp Regular

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    not my best, but I liked the way it came out. what do you think I could improve on?
    what can I do to get better? (besides practice, what should I practice)
     

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    Member sarkwalvein GBAtemp Psycho!

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    You look quite grumpy.
    Avoid reading incendiary sad news and long flaming threads.

    PS: And yes, it is a joke, I actually don't have any good suggestion but the portrait looks quite good.
     
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    can do
     
  4. x65943

    Member x65943 Hobby Artist

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    I'd add shading, and maybe work on a more realistic/believable ear shape

    I made some minor changes that make the piece look a little more natural. I think you should study them, and consider why they make the piece more believable.

    One thing to keep in mind, is that in a cartoony style like this, you don't want lines to have a lot of complexity - the more they resemble gentle curves - the better.

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    Member eechigoo GBAtemp's mentally broken rabbit

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    I really like your style imo.

    Looks really cartoonish!
     

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