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VinsCool
VinsCool
I really am reading it lol.
DarkRioru
do you like it? sorry if the romance in the story seems forcely crapped... I base my romantic knowledge on my experiences with my gf through the internet...
VinsCool
it's... interesting lol
DarkRioru
wow! you're the first person that didn't correct my grammar... 
VinsCool
I don't mind people's grammar, mine isn't too great.
And english isn't my first language anyway.
And english isn't my first language anyway.
endoverend
Funny, i used to be really into that genre of fanfiction :| And stories exactly like that one :|
But yeah the reason people correct your grammar is that it's really hard and unappealing to read something that looks bad. And yours isn't even the worst i've seen.
But yeah the reason people correct your grammar is that it's really hard and unappealing to read something that looks bad. And yours isn't even the worst i've seen.
endoverend
All I can say is be careful not to fall into clichés, keep going, don't quit, and keep asking for feedback, you'll get better. This type of pokemon story always falls into cliches. Don't do that.
endoverend
Oh yeah and try not to cuss so much in the story, it makes it look weird and cuss words are less effective when you really need to use them.
endoverend
Some of my favorite pieces from that genre if you're interested: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3311640/1/Minor-Miscalculations https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=7&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=0CDsQFjAGahUKEwj8xbPYtK_IAhUEaT4KHaQGAAg&url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.fanfiction.net%2Fs%2F9221699%2F1%2FPhases-Of-Change&usg=AFQjCNGew0tuPHL4MwNb5938kCYgqCoD2Q&sig2=ATNUrVUsOiXMqFPG8XH-fQ
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D @ diamondsofmayhem:Actually, finally found someone who was looking for the same thing. https://gbatemp.net/threads/lost-hyrule-warriors-legends-v1-6-0-ntr-plugin.628141/ to no avail.
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BigOnYa:
You ask your questions there, create a new thread if its not already answered, then eventually a 3ds genius will respond. -
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BigOnYa:
@K3Nv2 I got some cheapies at wallys, that are pretty good, already have lost a few expensive ones (one falls out and gone, can't find) while cutting grass so bought some cheap ones, and of course never lose these cheap ones. (Cheap meaning only $35, compared to air buds which I only have 1 of 2 now)
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BigOnYa:
You would think, esp using bluetooth, not GPS, like a "your getting hot-er" meter on your phone.
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BigOnYa:
I think they should tie up diddy, and let all the victims come and abuse him, we'll make a holiday of it every year. (jk, maybe)
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