I wrote a short story in Tempese.

Holy flappin' eyeballs...

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Q: How does tempese work?

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I'm not sure, but I guess you're qualified.

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I'm not very good at the language. I had to use a translator for half of it... I'm learning, however. Just like I learned Al Bhed. Anyone want to rate how good I am at Al Bhed, now? Same story, just in Al Bhed.

Cu in fedr in ruhao yht oin sygehk uid fah dra bruha nekhc. I yhcan ed h dra jeula ec “fid n i tuehk fed so tyikrdan?” I damm in kenm h cra cyo “so tyt ec tat”. DRAH FRU FYC BRUHA?

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[quote name='Sora de Eclaune' post='3734609' date='Jun 23 2011, 10:37 PM']I wrote a short story in Tempese. Can anyone read it and tell me how good I'm doing with the language?

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[quote name='Sora de Eclaune' post='3734629' date='Jun 23 2011, 10:44 PM']I'm not very good at the language. I had to use a translator for half of it... I'm learning, however. Just like I learned Al Bhed. Anyone want to rate how good I am at Al Bhed, now? Same story, just in Al Bhed.

Cu in fedr in ruhao yht oin sygehk uid fah dra bruha nekhc. I yhcan ed h dra jeula ec “fid n i tuehk fed so tyikrdan?” I damm in kenm h cra cyo “so tyt ec tat”. DRAH FRU FYC BRUHA?[/quote]

lol xD That makes no sense xD Maybe I was __ ___ _____!

That was pretty good but you used the word "______" when you should have used the word "______". It's more polite and gives more emotional depth to your character.

[quote name='Tonitonichopchop' post='3734637' date='Jun 23 2011, 03:50 PM']That was pretty good but you used the word "______" when you should have used the word "______". It's more polite and gives more emotional depth to your character.[/quote]
Oh. Thanks. That works out pretty well there.

Wtf is this...

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Raika, instead of "____", why not just use "_____"?
It's more descriptive, you know.
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[quote name='laxman0220' post='3734701' date='Jun 23 2011, 05:35 PM']Wtf is this...[/quote]
cool story bro
Stay tuned for more information.

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Umm, cool story bro.

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It was funny the first 1000 times. Now it's just ___________.
*leaves EOF-worthy thread*