Wrote A song hope you guys like it

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Oct 14, 2011
  1. steve007

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    Cob Web's


    I know that memories you welll never turn to dust. Some stand so long as I never make a fuss
    We try so hard to make them wish they never came to be. But your mind keeps them times and folds them in by me .

    Love is a cob web ,Told I was bob tedd , Wish I could top that ,Knowing it all Matt ,Grab me close baby , Wish you was maybe ,We all know whats all been said. Love is A cob web .

    Come in my dear and face your fears , And what he did to you remeber that things well always stick to glue . Reach up hard and grab some stars and know well stand by you. Them day's pass as we all go boo hoo Walk on by someday well rye and hope it came to be. Times are ruff and all is tuff as words stay by me take some pie and ride on by and we will try to flee , Them days are great and don't relate what there word mean to me .

    Love is a cob web ,Told I was bob tedd , Wish I could top that ,Knowing it all Matt ,grab me close baby ,Wish you was maybe ,We all know whats all been said , Love is A cob web .


    Love is a cod web , Love is Ah Cob web , Love is a cob weaaahhhh-eb -eb ( Wooo -Hoooo ...)

    Know me Love is A cob web miss you alway's and remeber that your love ones , your Pets ,Friend, Nabors goes for my lost dog Smokey Love you boy miss you hope your hearts stays in mind take care buddy see you soon someday . And always Love is A cob web don't forget me peace.


    ( memories of his Dog Smokey Kid napped last month on September 23, 4:00am)
    (People can be so cold hearted )
     


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    Wow, heart moving
     
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    Uhh...Yeah...It was great!

    ..Eheheh...*runs*
     
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    Truly moving.
    It touched my very soul and sent shivers down my spine.
     
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    I now cry every time I see a coob web
     
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  6. Hells Malice

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    That was the worst piece of crap i've ever read.

    and I used to proof read my friends short stories, a guy who couldn't spell loud.
     
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    What is this I don't even...
    *looks at OP*

    ...Oh.
     
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    It not the worst i've read, but it's still pretty bad......
     
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    Yeah, it's awful. Not the worst but it is awful.
     
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    Well, it wasn't really written to be good; it was written to express his feelings (refer to his older blog if you haven't).

    Even so, the 'crapiness' emphasizes that great wording or lyrics or w/e can't beat something that came from deep within him, no matter how poorly it's made into words for us to read. It really struck my heart. :)

    btw Steve, this sounds more like a poem to me. :P
     
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    For a song it's pretty bad..........
     
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    Might pass as a country song, lol.

    Joostin takes cover from every redneck/citizen in his home state.
     
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    Here's your Participation Trophy,
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    compliments of the Snailface. :P
     
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    Looks like someone thinks he's mature. I think you want the gay porn site over there.
     
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    Why were you here in the first place then? :unsure:
     
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    Stop it guys, he is a troll. You are just giving him what he wants. I've reported him. I'm sure this will get me plenty of insults, but please ignore what he says no matter who it is directed to.
     
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    Trolls will be trolls. :unsure:
     
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    You see, leaving your posts up is not possible. for they are too indecent. It is clearly you who does not have the maturity to post something decent. therefore you do not belong in this forum.
     
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    You basically seem to be here to say how shit the 'Temp is, and how we're all monstrous trolls.
    You haven't really said what your opinion on what the OP posted is :unsure:
    So basically: you seem to be here to inflate your own ego, by saying how superior you are to everyone else due to your morals being better than ours.
     
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    You're calling people [censored]s and pussies and calling out the mods. That is not decent at all. I understand that everyone is entitled to their own opinion but you should apologize for at least that.
     

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