The new script for Part 3

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  1. ComeTurismO
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    It's been over 2 weeks since the tragedy between Lancy and Jared has happened. Scott's living in his best friend's house, Pauline moved in with Kimberly (@ComeTurismO). Pauline (@Cherry Pie) is alone at home, while Kimberly has gone out. She begins asking herself if what really happened with Lancy had Brad (@VinsCool) responsible or not. She decides to leave her home and go over to her old house, where Brad might be living in. When she reaches there, the doors are locked, there's a condemned sign on the door. Scared, Pauline heads over to the house of Justin (@BurningDesire), Brad's best friend. She knocks on the door and Justin is yelling at Pauline for coming to his house. He gives a speech explaining how she is a disloyal wife, while she made Brad suffer. Pauline slaps him and yells back, she explains how ten years ago Brad ALWAYS abused her and the kids, physically, mentally, emotionally, and verbally. An awkward silence later, she asks for Brad's whereabouts. Justin screams for his name "BRAAAAAAAAAAD!" he says. Alright, so it turned out that Brad is living with Justin. Brad comes along, and gives an asshole-type of a greeting to Pauline.

    Meanwhile, Scott (@ComeTurismO) is FURIOUS in his best friend's house. He's alone, and talks to himself furiously regarding the accusation of murder and the death of his beloved girlfriend, Lancy. He curses his father for his doings, and his mother for not trusting him. He curses at his sister who he hasn't heard from in a while (he doesn't know Jared died) for making the story even worse, as Jared (@ArnoDorian) is the one who kept preventing herself from seeing her brother and his girlfriend attempt to change her sexual orientation and her style of clothing. Because of her, he was naked with his girlfriend, making him have the accusation of rape. But then, he decides to find her to forgive her and team up with her and rebel against his distrusting parents. He knows that she must not be in the house, as he recently heard that that home has been teared down, as there were screams in the house heard around the whole neighborhood.

    The scene switches over to a graveyard. It's so spooky here, lots of pigeons and owls flying over the dead atmosphere. Suddenly, something is happening to one of the graves. The tombstone is shaking, and it ends up breaking. A healthy living hand punches its way out of the ground, and suddenly the full human comes into his or hers alive form. This person stands up, heads to the gate to exit the graveyard. But then, Kimberly comes along and greets this living human. This living human comes out to be Jared, she finally came back to life. Jared greets her grandmother, and hugs her. She explains to her what happened recently, and what her mother did to her. Kimberly pushes her off and explains her awareness on this issue, and says that in order to prevent more issues within the city and family, she must remain in her tombstone. Although King Asgore determined her fate of remaining alive, she must remain dead. Kimberly brings out a gun and is about to pull the trigger, but then Jared somehow has a rocket launcher and kills her grandmother. The police is coming, and it's the same police that investigated the murder of Lancy. They ask Jared what happened, and Jared says she doesn't know. The policeman investigates but remembers that she was present in Pauline's house that day and lets her go because she is the brother of a very sexy man (yes this policeman is gay and doesn't arrest attractive people or their relatives). The policeman leaves, and Jared has a final line saying she is getting her asshole family what they deserve.

    Any questions?

    @Cherry Pie = Pauline & Police
    @ArnoDorian = Jared
    @VinsCool = Brad
    @BurningDesire = Justin
    @ComeTurismO = Scott & Kimberly

    let me know if there are any questions, and once I answer a few we'll get things started in a separate thread.
     
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  2. Flame

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    one question.


    why you still here?
     
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    Here is a question. Why am I a asshole :P
     
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    If you're best friend is being evil to his wife, you'll obviously support him!

    :WUBAROO: VinsCool
     
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    In real life I'd support the girl but fuck it lol it's the Internet
     
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    WE LIVE IN A FUCKED UP WORLD 2 DAY
     
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    YOUR OBAMA FIX IT 2 DAY
     
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    NA, MORE CONFLICTS WITHIN THE CITIZENS = PROFIT 2 DAY.
     
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