What do you prefer?
She dream of becoming Mrs. emperor and Mr.emperor with Dylan and conduct the empire together.
or
She dream of becoming Mrs. emperor with Dylan and conduct the empire together.
I vote for the second one, but it should be "She dreams of becoming Mrs. emperor with Dylan and conduct the empire together." and wouldn't "Empress" sound better instead of "Mrs. emperor"?
This way it could be: She dreams of becoming an Empress with Dylan and rulling the empire together.
Actually, even your suggestion isn't quite correct.
For one thing, '
ruling' should only having one L.
And '
with Dylan' is in the wrong place--so, what it's really saying is that she dreams of
both her and Dylan becoming Empresses, and that's obviously not what's intended.
There are 2 correct options here:
She dreams of becoming an Empress, and
with Dylan, ruling the empire together.
~ OR ~
She dreams of becoming an Empress and ruling the empire together
with Dylan.