Petite@EVA

Discussion in 'GBAtemp Art Studio' started by cosmo2389, Jun 16, 2008.

  1. cosmo2389
    OP

    cosmo2389 GBAtemp Fan

    Member
    421
    0
    Apr 1, 2008
    United States
    United States
    Hi everyone! I just recently finished a short fan-comic (doujin) that I started. Currently it stands at four pages (including cover), that's why I'm calling it micro. I may add some more to it later, but currently, it's fine as it stands. I've worked really hard on it, and even did the interior pages in full color!

    Just so you know, it's a Neon Genesis Evangelion gag/comedy comic. It's not mean to be serious, just funny. Please look if you like! Comments and feedback will definitely be appreciated! Thanks for looking! [​IMG]

    You can check it out:
    Cover
    Page One
    Page Two
    Page Three

    Oh yeah, I forgot to mention, please read it right to left... I felt since it was a Yon Koma (Four Panel) comic, I just had to do it right to left!
     


  2. ScuberSteve

    ScuberSteve Newbie

    made me lol, and now i want more.
    you did your job.
     
  3. cosmo2389
    OP

    cosmo2389 GBAtemp Fan

    Member
    421
    0
    Apr 1, 2008
    United States
    United States
    Thanks a bunch ScuberSteve! If I make more I will be sure to post!
     
  4. Eternal Myst

    Eternal Myst Back from the Myst.

    Member
    1,634
    6
    May 2, 2008
    United States
    I have a bomb alallalallala
    Made me super lol.You sure are talented.
     
  5. cosmo2389
    OP

    cosmo2389 GBAtemp Fan

    Member
    421
    0
    Apr 1, 2008
    United States
    United States
    @Eternal Myst

    Thanks a bunch! I really appreciate it and I'm glad you liked it!
    Oh yeah, I like the new avatar/sig!
     
  6. distorted.freque

    distorted.freque I'm getting mixed signals here!

    Member
    776
    0
    Jan 31, 2008
    Canada
    Right about...here.
    >_< The pictures were pretty much meh-ish at best. (I'm sorry. I blame it on my classmates in Art class. They're all pros so...yeah.) D:

    Sort of funny in a...haha, so? kind of way.
     
  7. cosmo2389
    OP

    cosmo2389 GBAtemp Fan

    Member
    421
    0
    Apr 1, 2008
    United States
    United States
    @distorted.frequency

    Thanks for the comment! My art's not the best, it's just the way I draw! I like chibis and such! You know?
     
  8. distorted.freque

    distorted.freque I'm getting mixed signals here!

    Member
    776
    0
    Jan 31, 2008
    Canada
    Right about...here.
    I can't do chibis...so I envy you for that. I like doing realistic objects though. XD (Check sig if you wanna see the awfulness that is my art.)
     
  9. cosmo2389
    OP

    cosmo2389 GBAtemp Fan

    Member
    421
    0
    Apr 1, 2008
    United States
    United States
    Your art's not bad! Your landscape is super good in that first pic! (I envy you for that!) And that last pic is pretty awesome as well!
     
  10. distorted.freque

    distorted.freque I'm getting mixed signals here!

    Member
    776
    0
    Jan 31, 2008
    Canada
    Right about...here.
    Thanks. [​IMG] But I still can't do chibis even if my life depends on it. D:
     
  11. cosmo2389
    OP

    cosmo2389 GBAtemp Fan

    Member
    421
    0
    Apr 1, 2008
    United States
    United States
    They take practice (at least, it took me practice) and a lot of it... I started about four years ago, and I have just now begun actually liking how they look... I guess you could sat they take a lot of fine tuning...
     
  12. distorted.freque

    distorted.freque I'm getting mixed signals here!

    Member
    776
    0
    Jan 31, 2008
    Canada
    Right about...here.
    Four years?! D: So that's the secret to your success?!

    ...>_> I wish I was as dedicated. I'm more of a writer person so drawing has always been secondary to me...

    (The art stuff I've done were the first ones I've done for that kind of drawing. Did a lot of practice pieces before that though...for class. >_>)
     
  13. NINTENDO DS

    NINTENDO DS GBAtemp Regular

    Member
    113
    0
    Jun 10, 2008
    United States
    in a mall
    "Im not gay"
    Those comics made me lol.You are indeed talented.Nice Job!!!!!
    [​IMG]
     
  14. cosmo2389
    OP

    cosmo2389 GBAtemp Fan

    Member
    421
    0
    Apr 1, 2008
    United States
    United States
    Thanks a bunch! I appreciate the comment, and I'm glad you were entertained!
     
  15. Endogene

    Endogene GBAtemp Fan

    Member
    439
    0
    Apr 2, 2008
    France
    brittany
    you should consider using another program to color in you drawings, my self il like to use the "virtual watercolor" tool in corel painter, i used it to color in my "ode to JPH":
    http://gbatemp.net/index.php?showtopic=902...p;#entry1202373

    Using this tool OVER the border (when you use watercolors over something black the black stays black) prevents those white lines you have in your comic
     
  16. RyuKakashi

    RyuKakashi GBAtemp Fan

    Member
    450
    0
    Mar 18, 2006
    United States
    Use a different font, one that less resembles CAD.

    Good work I suppose, but I personally didn't find it funny. That's my own issue tho.
     
  17. Upperleft

    Upperleft Namcoholic

    Member
    1,049
    3
    Aug 15, 2007
    Interesting .. so i herd u liek chibiz
    i cant draw ANYTHING but chibis [​IMG]
    so i phail at every art class i have lol
     
  18. Psyfira

    Psyfira Credit: 0ml. Insert tea to continue

    Member
    3,887
    15
    Dec 31, 2003
    England
    Why? Sorry nothing personal, it's one of my pet hates when people write english comics backwards. Japanese comics (and translations thereof) are backwards for a reason!
     
  19. Endogene

    Endogene GBAtemp Fan

    Member
    439
    0
    Apr 2, 2008
    France
    brittany
    i think she wanted to give it that "japanese" feel
    edit: although yeah i see what you mean
     
  20. Narin

    Narin The Cheat Master, kupo!

    Former Staff
    2,624
    24
    Feb 19, 2008
    United States
    Haha, wow, nice little comic. I like it.