Need some feed back on my comic

I like the logo, I don´t understand the Smirnoff joke..but I´m an ass.

Cool site!

The items on the shop are awesome

 

I'm not really qualified to kriteek(sp) your work, but it does remind me quite a bit of Peter Bagge. If you don't know who I'm talking about google him and compare/contrast for yourself.

That didn't help a damn bit did it?

PS. I'm a giant Pete Bagge fan, so that's good right?

Keep on truckin' baby!

 

So so. Wouldn't look out of place as a doodle in a class note book. A lot of the jokes could do with a little fine tuning. I tried doing a comic once... it was enjoyable doing it on paper but from the moment I scanned it in, it looked like crap on a computer screen.

 

In the middle of those pictures there were a few that made me grin, the STOP one was good.
God knows I love surreal comics, White Ninja and The Perry Bible Fellowship for example, but it takes more than a picture and a seemingly inane quote to turn it into something funny.

Anyone can make stuff like this.

You need to be a bit more self-critical about what you think that's a good joke and what's just there to increase the comic count.
Feel free to ignore me if you think all of those were hillarious. After all, you enjoying making them is the principal thing in a comic

 

I think a lot of your comics make some interesting observations. I won't say your jokes need work because I don't really believe young minds can really come up with witty or hilarious jokes. It takes at least twenty years of life and learning to even approach real comedy, excluding the occasional comedic genius. Keep working on your comics and ask some adults you trust to give you an honest opinion of their value. I'm sure your buddies at school will want to see them all but I'd recommend limiting the ones you post online to your very best. That way, you can build an audience that trusts your work. I guarantee homestarrunner.com would not have gained the popularity it did if they had thrown up (pun intended) every idea they had and every sketch they drew.

By the way, your two shower related sketches and the tow-away-zone made me smile.

 

i loved nr 11. I think you should increase the size of the titles, so they aren't missed that easy. Especially Nr11 gets twice as funny if you read both the title and the picture.

 

pretty good, I cant say how glad I am its not another fucking sprite comic.
one crit really, the humour is a bit too obvious, it removes the subtletly I think the jokes need to be more effective.
take:

is probably my favourite, but I think it would be even better if the dude just had an expression like rather than explaining how confused he is


the smirnoff ones were awesome too

 

Wahahaha....its funny cos its true

 

Agreed

 

you inspired me!

 

I lolled....