Need opinion on a song I made

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  1. pgimps
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    Please rate my song on a scale from 1 - 10, 10 being the best, I would also love some criticizing on how to make it better. Also this is a "mix" that I made from other songs. The only thing I made was the mix, not the songs in the mix.



    Here is the link: http://www.mediafire.com/?zh5i5nirf58141l
     
  2. junkerde

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    hmmm,, even thought this stuff aint my genre i guess its aight, needs a bit of cleaning up though, the mixing that is.
     
  3. tagzard

    tagzard Tagzard the Crazy Dinosaur with Wings.

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    its okey for a retro alterniave person
     
  4. Gagarin

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    dwn-ing now. I'll let you know soon.
     
  5. imshortandrad

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    It was good, it seemed all over the place, though. And I agree, maybe a little cleaning up.
     
  6. pgimps
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    ok I'll try to clean it up a bit tomorrow and post a new one, but can you tell me what parts are messy? For example: 0:22-1:45
     
  7. Shockwind

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    inside a post-apocalyptic world.
    It's ok for me, but shouldn't be this kind of topic be at the GBAtemp Art Studio? [​IMG]