I agree, too much useless backstory and not enough explosion. I don't care if it had little to no story at all, I wanted an action flick that did exactly that. Useless dialogue scenes were useless.
Good review although the jump cuts are rather apparent. Generally a good thing to do is use footage from the film to make the jump cuts nonexistent. But of course you need a copy of the film and the rights to it (although I think legally as long as it's classified under review purposes you can use the footage, although Youtube may take it down).
I liked the review though, you spoke very clearly and the quality was much better, a nice change from your typical "Hi I'm 12 and I'm gonna review a movie I have no clue about" shit you see on Youtube.
Keep on reviewing buddy!