My bad poem

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  1. Pizzaroo
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    This is my bad poem that I knew wouldn't win so I never submitted it:

    There once was a temper named Beve,
    He said he did more then he could achieve,
    He thought he was the best,
    He put ysmenu on his R4DS,
    And then he got flamed from dawn until eve.

    Oh no.
     
  2. Vulpes Abnocto

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    Pretty amusing, man.

    (But didn't he call himself "Beve"?)
     
  3. Pizzaroo
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    I don't know. Probably *changes it*
     
  4. Tall Alien

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    cool
     
  5. alex

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    Man you would have won for sure!
     
  6. science

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    You didn't like my poem ;_;

    PS Awesome, Pizzaroo [​IMG]
     
  7. Pizzaroo
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    I like science's poem the best XD
     
  8. xalphax

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    both poems RAWK!

    but science's poem was just an itsy bitsy tiny bit better! [​IMG]
     
  9. alex

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    Yours was awesome too!(what was it? j/k)