i reported these typos and errors in
tutorial 4 (deck making) to the wiki:
In
Tutorial 4 (the deck making
tutorial) there are some typos and errors:
- "Now, it out with Naruto's Battle Koma!" should be "Now, let's try it out with Naruto's Battle Koma!"
- "By touching or pressing the A Button above the set Koma you can select and add another Koma!" should be "By touching or pressing the A Button above the set Koma, you can pick up the set Koma!"
- "When you set a Koma, you can go back and choose another Koma!" should be "Once you set a Koma, you can go back and choose another Koma!"
- After he sets all the komas he says "Now, the Koma is set!" I think it would make more sense if he says "The Komas are set!" The word 'Now' can be removed since the next sentence also starts with 'Now' let's learn about assigning....
- "Your Manga Deck will be incomplete if you don't assign a Leader! Always make sure!" should be "Your Manga Deck will be incomplete if you don't assign a Leader! Always make sure to do so!"
- "Here we've assigned as Leader Luffy for this Manga Deck!" should be "Here we've assigned Luffy as the Leader for this Manga Deck!"
- "there are a few more things to consider with the many Koma available. I'll teach you!" missed an 's', should be "there are a few more things to consider with the many Komas available. I'll teach you!"
- "If you set a Koma overlaping another the overlapped Koma gets stocked." missed a comma, should be "If you set a Koma overlapping another, the overlapped Koma automatically gets stocked."
- "Unset the Koma you want removed and move it up here touching it or pressing the A Button" should be "Unset the Koma you want removed, and move it up here by touching it or pressing the A Button"
- "and all your Koma will return to the Koma List!" should be "and all your Komas will return to the Koma List!"
- when he's explaining how to sort and return to displaying the full list, the 2 page display and sentence arrangement made it confusing. It says, "at this spot, touch or press the A Button /(page break)/ here to reset the index and view all the Koma again." should be "at this spot, touch or press the A Button here to reset the index... /(page break)/ and view all the Komas again."
- "If you run out of Koma for your Manga Deck, use J-Power!" should be "If you run out of Komas for your Manga Deck, use J-Power!"
- "And you'll be able to reach all galaxy with powerfull komas !" should be "And youu'll be able to reach all the galaxies with powerful komas!"