The eyes are off-centre to the rest of the head; the gap between the eyes is where the small eye should be. And the little fly's not at the same angle as his flight path
I think it should say "Written by Some Random Celebrity" cause thats one problem I noticed when I was getting my son some books the other day, too many freakin celebrities have written Childrens books...and guess what, most of those celebs DONT EVEN HAVE KIDS!!! They're polluting the shelves if you ask me... >.>
This reminds me of the time when I stumbled upon what looked like a childrens book on net. Turns out, it was hentai. I had nightmares for a week since then.