How can I make my art better?

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  1. AlanJohn
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    Here's a hentei I made on history class----
    Warning: Spoilers inside!
     
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    OH GAWD MY EYES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY WHY ?!?!?!??! WHAT DID I EVAR DO TO YOU ?!??!?!?!?!?!?! OMFG MY EYES IT BURNZZZZZZZ KILL ME NOAW!!!!!
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  3. AlanJohn
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    So how do I imrpove meh artt?
     
  4. Narayan

    Narayan desu~

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    i dunno. can't see it. i'm on a net cafe that blocks youtube and other stuff. so i may have been saved.
     
  5. AlanJohn
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    Its actually a very beutifull japanese Doujisnsurwryu Hentmei manga about a boy who really wants sxe
     
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    Sausage Head Lord Sausage LXIX

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    fapfapfap.
     
  7. Narayan

    Narayan desu~

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  8. AlanJohn
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    FAP FAP FAP SLAP FAP FAP LAP FAP FAP FAP TAP FAD FAD
     
  9. AlanJohn
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    doubel post
     
  10. Sausage Head

    Sausage Head Lord Sausage LXIX

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    single post
     
  11. AlanJohn
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    Mr FAP FAP, I will give you soon a NEW hentmei manga...
     
  12. Sausage Head

    Sausage Head Lord Sausage LXIX

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    OH GOD YES

    FAPFAPFAPFAPFAPFAPFAPFAPFAPFPAFPAPFAPFAPFAPFPAFPAPFAPFAPFPAFPAFPAFPAFPAPFAPFAPFA
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  13. Fear Zoa

    Fear Zoa This... This is the world we live in

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    I don't get it....is this supposed to be arousing? .....

    .....nevermind there it goes
     
  14. AlanJohn
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    Warning: Spoilers inside!


    YOU HAPPY BRO???
     
  15. Sausage Head

    Sausage Head Lord Sausage LXIX

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    no

    the sequel sucks
     
  16. AlanJohn
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    ... It looks like It needs the reboot treatment... Don't worry, the new one will have 200% more pussy in it. And 400% more seks...
     
  17. Fear Zoa

    Fear Zoa This... This is the world we live in

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    indeed....not enough memes
     
  18. Sausage Head

    Sausage Head Lord Sausage LXIX

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    i want my hentai to contain secks, not sex or seks

    profact:
    'seks' means 'sex' in Dutch