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  1. steve007
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    steve007 GBAtemp Fan

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    I gotten good news , Sara Evans liked my song she wrote it down fast 5 sec wow on pad with a pen

    That what Gary told me shes fast .




    Hear is my song I wrote , If your guys are new to Gbatemp.net





    Cob Web's


    I know that memories you welll never turn to dust. Some stand so long as I never make a fuss
    We try so hard to make them wish they never came to be. But your mind keeps them times and folds them in by me .

    Love is a cob web ,Told I was bob tedd , Wish I could top that ,Knowing it all Matt ,Grab me close baby , Wish you was maybe ,We all know whats all been said. Love is A cob web .

    Come in my dear and face your fears , And what he did to you remeber that things well always stick to glue . Reach up hard and grab some stars and know well stand by you. Them day's pass as we all go boo hoo Walk on by someday well rye and hope it came to be. Times are ruff and all is tuff as words stay by me take some pie and ride on by and we will try to flee , Them days are great and don't relate what there word mean to me .

    Love is a cob web ,Told I was bob tedd , Wish I could top that ,Knowing it all Matt ,grab me close baby ,Wish you was maybe ,We all know whats all been said , Love is A cob web .


    Love is a cod web , Love is Ah Cob web , Love is a cob weaaahhhh-eb -eb ( Wooo -Hoooo ...)

    Know me Love is A cob web miss you alway's and remeber that your love ones , your Pets ,Friend, Nabors goes for my lost dog Smokey Love you boy miss you hope your hearts stays in mind take care buddy see you soon someday . And always Love is A cob web don't forget me peace.
     
  2. Hells Malice

    Hells Malice Are you a bully?

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    That song just gets me every time I read it.




    It just gets me that it's so unbelievably terrible.
     
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  3. Forstride

    Forstride The rudder moves when I turn the wheel

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    >mfw rhyming words just to rhyme them without any meaning at all is considered music

    ...Oh wait
     
  4. Hells Malice

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    Hm.
    Maybe this would work if someone rapped it.

    Someone go rap it and see how it goes.
     
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  5. Terminator02

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    Yo dawg, I'll need some fat beats before i can let loose on these rhymes.
     
  6. 10_0ARMY

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    So much hate lol. Music is just poetry with instrumentals dubbed over it. It be cool to hear this in a complete musical form. Reading lyrics just isn't the same as listening to a nicely done song
     
  7. Vulpes Abnocto

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    Nooo, we're not doing this again.
    You can post about your "cod web" (sic) song in blogs.
     
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