ROM Hack Days of memories translation

[takeya yuki]

Days of memories 2
English patch
(UPDATE)

Scene:​

NOTE :
Sorry but DOM3 got
canceled because of
text issues....
I try to fix the text
but no use. But
translation of DOM2
still on scheduled.

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[takeya yuki]

Sorry guys for take many times to done this translation, don't worry I will continue this translation.......

 

[mdtank]

This seems like an otome game which I'm not into myself. However it feels good to see projects like this, keep it up!

 

[Boricausufire]

Hello!

I love KoF thank you for taking your time in this project, I'm really looking forward to it (: a friend of mine is interested as well.

How come you will only translate only the routes you want? :o I mean, I understand the whole process of translation is quite stressful but don't limit yourself though. Take all the time you need.

 

[takeya yuki]

Request more hand please because I can' t handle this project with my 2 hand and 1 brain....
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[Assetou]

That's great! You are translating very quickly I really want to play at this game and you put so much effort on it! Ganbatte ^^

 

[mdtank]

Based on the screenshots above I believe you need an editor for this project. The sentences above do not feel natural in english, i feel you have translated the sentences too literally from japanese. English is not my native language though.

Bad Bunny, can you post a longer text from your current translation?

 

[takeya yuki]

Sorry for my Engrish(Japanese and east English speaker) I can't help with it......

 

[takeya yuki]

Mdtank I hope this satified you because you ask for long text.

 

[takeya yuki]

Damn honestly I really love to see
this couple
I wish they grow up already and
get married already
and make some kids too.

SORRY IF I RUN FROM TOPIC HERE
BUT PLEASE SUPPORT FOR THIS COUPLE

 

[mdtank]

The screenshot you have linked now is grammatically better. However I'll give some examples from your previous texts:

why he been banned -> why he has been banned
Like he says on he thread -> Like he says on his thread
the translation take many time,month or year to finish -> the translation will take a lot of time, several months or even years to finish
Sorry all, even I make table file -> Sorry all, even if I make table file
I try finish what I can -> I will try finishing what I can
Glad to see rich person in here -> good to see someone rich here
Does girl really need love -> Do girls really need love
school to take care -> school to take care of

I see small mistakes happening very often. Not because of literal translation but wrong inflection or tense used.
This criticism is not about me trying to demotivate you, I'd like to see this translation to be a success. If you spend a lot of time and effort doing this and after release you will get negative feedback, I'm sure you would be very disappointed.

 

[Boricausufire]

Nice nice ! Glad to see more progress!

As I said before, take all the time you need.

I thought about the editing text issue. It's true that you can't literally translate Japanese to english, instead, you put what you think it should be in the dialogue, which is good.
Now, you said english isn't your main language and neither is mine but you can get help with an extra editor to check every mispell and incoherency you may have in your sentences.

Have you visited http://www.romhacking.net/forum/?

People there are very active and give a nice welcome to new projects, maybe you could get help there. I suggest that you make a thread of this Project in their forum.

 

[takeya yuki]

Sorry for my Engrish again....

 

[takeya yuki]

Sorry, can't help with my Engrish....

Pic of New Love Couple
Matt Arisato and Liebe Ai

 

[Boricausufire]

Yo!

About your issue. Unfortunately, I don't know how to deal with it :/
I'm a total noob with hacking tools and all of that stuff.

Maybe you could read in another topic about this particular problem or watch a tutorial.

I insist, you should give http://www.romhacking.net/forum/ a visit and form a small translation team to help you with your work.
Or if you want I can make the thread for you and see if someone is interested, if they are, I will tell you.

 

[Die Antwoord]

Bump. I'm extremely interested in this, I've been wanting to play this for a while. Thank you for taking your time to do this and good luck.

 

[takeya yuki]

Thanks for support dude

 

[takeya yuki]

I plan to release this game partial patch soon. Just 4 more character story to go.

 

[Pablitox]

Sorry for my Engrish again....

maybe a person interested in translating stuff might help you out. If you want you can post a help ad on romhacking.net

 

[takeya yuki]

maybe a person interested in translating stuff might help you out. If you want you can post a help ad on romhacking.net

Thanks for info, Pablitox-Sama.
It's is ok now because my English is fine, thanks to Google English Lesson. Yea I plan for more 3 or 4 hand to help me, if I want to make a full patch of this game but if no one want to help me. I had no choice but to release a partial patch after I'll finish 4 more character story...

Ya, I will try to get any help from romhacking later.