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This a poem of my life so far. Feed back needed so i can improve`it thx. . .
A look in the life
When I was young I was like an explorer in a new land.
Searching learning and understanding.
People said I was quiet and timid but I was just observing my surroundings.
At this time I didn’t know what I wanted to be.
Unlike other kids being an astronauts or police officer wasn’t my dream.
I grew up in a crime filled neighborhood a place where it wasn’t smart to explore around.
The crime on the streets there was more frequent than in jail.
As year passed I became more outspoken.
Elementary thru Middle school I changed.
I became more joyful playful.
Like a Cub chasing effortlessly after a ball.
During this time I discovered new things about me.
I had a talent in drawing and had an increasing interest in sports.
It was sort of like a bird learning to fly how I extended my abilities.
When I look forward I can see myself as a doctor or a lawyer.
Springing out of the hood to become successful.
To me my adventure is not over.
Exploring searching learning.
To better myself and people around me.
It’s like a race to success an obstacles ahead are weights on my feet.
Only thing to do is to keep my head up high.
And continue on the path to success.
Furthermore life is like a ticking time bomb.
And I’m the chief of the bomb squad.
People who help you along the way are part of your squad.
Search, learn, and understand.
Three strong words you can base you life on.
Fin ……
A look in the life
When I was young I was like an explorer in a new land.
Searching learning and understanding.
People said I was quiet and timid but I was just observing my surroundings.
At this time I didn’t know what I wanted to be.
Unlike other kids being an astronauts or police officer wasn’t my dream.
I grew up in a crime filled neighborhood a place where it wasn’t smart to explore around.
The crime on the streets there was more frequent than in jail.
As year passed I became more outspoken.
Elementary thru Middle school I changed.
I became more joyful playful.
Like a Cub chasing effortlessly after a ball.
During this time I discovered new things about me.
I had a talent in drawing and had an increasing interest in sports.
It was sort of like a bird learning to fly how I extended my abilities.
When I look forward I can see myself as a doctor or a lawyer.
Springing out of the hood to become successful.
To me my adventure is not over.
Exploring searching learning.
To better myself and people around me.
It’s like a race to success an obstacles ahead are weights on my feet.
Only thing to do is to keep my head up high.
And continue on the path to success.
Furthermore life is like a ticking time bomb.
And I’m the chief of the bomb squad.
People who help you along the way are part of your squad.
Search, learn, and understand.
Three strong words you can base you life on.
Fin ……