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    Real Money Trade: Interview and Community Q&A

    This "interview" is nothing more than an FAQ that could be placed on the site. Outside of that, the literal owner of the site is not only calling people unintelligent for their critique of business practices, but is replying to every response he feels like with passive aggressive tones. Why...
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    Ryukouki Discusses! The Censorship Problem

    I'll send you a PM with a full critiqued examples int he morning, but namely, for a starter, your post here comes off as passive aggressive if nothing else. You say you're welcome to tips, pointers, and help, but you're claiming to only take them from "someone with credentials" and you...
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    Ryukouki Discusses! The Censorship Problem

    None of what you've said challenges what I've written. Spending a lot of time writing to "create insightful discussion" and "breathing fresh air into the forums and [its] discussions" has nothing to do with the fact that the article is written poorly due to the aforementioned examples. Also...
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    Ryukouki Discusses! The Censorship Problem

    Honestly. GBATemp needs to hire an editor desperately. This article has a solid idea, but the way its written makes me want to avoid it. It *could* be great, even though it's communicated sloppily, but the need for an editor is incredibly high. I notice this on many other reported articles and...
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    Gamers and the Idea of Entitlement

    Does GBATemp have editors? The flow and pacing of this article is all over the place, it some very clear parsing issues, and the wording could use some attention every now and again.
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    Gaming Nintendo and the Current Online Infrastructure

    Are you taking any writing courses or are you just winging it? I don't know if you take this as seriously as I should be assuming reporters do, but your writing is less than optimal. The shift in tenses, the unfounded opinions stated as facts, and the overall flow is all off. I registered awhile...
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