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Very nice Review,awful Game...great Job,ma Lady.❤^_^
Good job! Hope my gf waited to pick that up. Oof.
Thank you Alex and MajinCubyan for the kind words.
Links or Review 2 did not happen
There you go lol
Some Feedback/Constructive criticism. I felt the first paragraph was too wordy. It's a review not a narration.
Could've cut down alot of that fat to get a nice thin slice. A slice made of cat. Cuz we all know cats belong in our stomach, not as pets. Dogs are the real man's best friend.
JK I love cats but not the musical cats.
The first paragraph was vastly different up to a few hours before the review was posted. I was asked by a staff member (not going to meantion it was relauby lol) to rewrite it which I did and he said it was perfect. So I don't know lol. But I will take on board your comment should I get to do another review for the site.
I guess it adds human character to it. A shared experience. But i'm more of a get straight to the point kind of guy with little patience. Just gimme straight information. I guess different people value different things in a review.
SG854 like I said I'm new to this whole review lark. So all advice is greatly appreciated. All I hope for is the review turned out better than my first one. Now that was really awful lol.
Links to 1st review or it might've happend but maybe not.
I don't want to but here you go I guess lol. https://gbatemp.net/review/is-it-wrong-to-try-to-pick-up-girls-in-a-dungeon-familia-myth-infinite-combate.1474/
It started good then went downhill, lol. I wish I can understand what this sentence means. It actually made me laugh.
"No huge world the game's budget all menu-driven" - AmandaRose
A sentence in one of your paragraphs, not the sentence above but a different one took me a couple of reads before I understood it.
Simply switching the word order woud've improved the clarity alot.
I have a few things to say about the following.
"No huge world the game's budget all menu-driven"
1. I have no idea wtf I was on about with that statement.
2. I have no idea how it was missed by T-hug and P1ngpong when they checked over the review before it was posted lol.