Comments on Profile Post by AmandaRose

  1. alexander1970
    alexander1970
    Very nice Review,awful Game...great Job,ma Lady.❤^_^
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    Jan 21, 2021
  2. MajinCubyan
    MajinCubyan
    Good job! Hope my gf waited to pick that up. Oof.
    Jan 21, 2021
  3. AmandaRose
    AmandaRose
    Thank you Alex and MajinCubyan for the kind words.
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    Jan 21, 2021
  4. SG854
    SG854
    Links or Review 2 did not happen
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    Jan 22, 2021
  5. AmandaRose
    AmandaRose
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    Jan 22, 2021
  6. SG854
    SG854
    Some Feedback/Constructive criticism. I felt the first paragraph was too wordy. It's a review not a narration.

    Could've cut down alot of that fat to get a nice thin slice. A slice made of cat. Cuz we all know cats belong in our stomach, not as pets. Dogs are the real man's best friend.
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    Jan 22, 2021
  7. SG854
    SG854
    JK I love cats but not the musical cats.
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    Jan 22, 2021
  8. AmandaRose
    AmandaRose
    The first paragraph was vastly different up to a few hours before the review was posted. I was asked by a staff member (not going to meantion it was relauby lol) to rewrite it which I did and he said it was perfect. So I don't know lol. But I will take on board your comment should I get to do another review for the site.
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    Jan 22, 2021
  9. SG854
    SG854
    I guess it adds human character to it. A shared experience. But i'm more of a get straight to the point kind of guy with little patience. Just gimme straight information. I guess different people value different things in a review.
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    Jan 22, 2021
  10. AmandaRose
    AmandaRose
    SG854 like I said I'm new to this whole review lark. So all advice is greatly appreciated. All I hope for is the review turned out better than my first one. Now that was really awful lol.
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    Jan 22, 2021
  11. SG854
    SG854
    Links to 1st review or it might've happend but maybe not.
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    Jan 22, 2021
  12. AmandaRose
    AmandaRose
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    Jan 22, 2021
  13. SG854
    SG854
    It started good then went downhill, lol. I wish I can understand what this sentence means. It actually made me laugh.

    "No huge world the game's budget all menu-driven" - AmandaRose
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    Jan 22, 2021
  14. SG854
    SG854
    A sentence in one of your paragraphs, not the sentence above but a different one took me a couple of reads before I understood it.

    Simply switching the word order woud've improved the clarity alot.
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    Jan 22, 2021
  15. AmandaRose
    AmandaRose
    I have a few things to say about the following.
    "No huge world the game's budget all menu-driven"

    1. I have no idea wtf I was on about with that statement.

    2. I have no idea how it was missed by T-hug and P1ngpong when they checked over the review before it was posted lol.
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    Jan 22, 2021