Gaming Is this a good map so far? (Minecraft)

[TheDreamLord]

Doing a Dwarves vs Zombies match map for a competition. Winnner gets their map used. What do you guys think of this? It's themed Jurassic Park.

That's where zombies spawn (Bedrock pillar signifies the zombie dome.)

Here's what It looks like from far for Dwarves..

Here it is up close.
So what do you guys think? What can I improve upon? Thanks.

Note: I chose the theme myself.

 

[Joe88]

It's themed Jurassic Park.

maybe im not seeing something here...

 

[TheDreamLord]

It's themed Jurassic Park.

maybe im not seeing something here...

I honestly wasn't sure on what to do for Jurassic park, so I did close. Grass, flowers, huge trees. also, I forgot to add, an overgrown and forgotten about Jurassic Park. Hence the snow, ice, and giant mushrooms.

 

[injected11]

...Jurassic park ... Hence the snow, ice, and giant mushrooms.

Jurassic Park took place on an island near Costa Rica. Wouldn't see very much snow and ice there...

 

[TheDreamLord]

...Jurassic park ... Hence the snow, ice, and giant mushrooms.

Jurassic Park took place on an island near Costa Rica. Wouldn't see very much snow and ice there...

I know. Apocalypse happened ok? XD The idea I wanted was that it was old, overgrown and uncared for. I also want to know if it's a good design.

 

[person66]

To be brutally honest, no, I think it looks like shit. It looks like you just found a snow biome then spent 5 minutes planting mushrooms everywhere.

If you want a old overgrown Jurassic park feel, then maybe try a jungle, and use mossy and cracked stone and stuff to make broken down structures and paths or whatever. And no snow. Mods like single player commands with worldedit can help a lot as well.

 

[Hells Malice]

To be brutally honest, no, I think it looks like shit. It looks like you just found a snow biome then spent 5 minutes planting mushrooms everywhere.

If you want a old overgrown Jurassic park feel, then maybe try a jungle, and use mossy and cracked stone and stuff to make broken down structures and paths or whatever. And no snow. Mods like single player commands with worldedit can help a lot as well.

This.

You've pretty much made a (remarkably plain) building, and started the Mushroom Kingdom.
Not an ounce of Jurassic park anywhere.