summer time poem by me

I am not gonna lie, it is not very good. But the subject is one that anyone can write a great poem about. Try to reasearch a little more on writing poems, and you will be doing better in no time

Here is one by me:

The day ends, and my dream begins
Why must life be so dull
The trend, it never ends
A rose in life
will die in strife

The game world alluring
keeps my dream alive for touring
The rose ingame
will turn from thorn and petal
to a beautiful young woman

So elegant and meaningful
an everpresent war keeps you on your toes
there are highs and lows
Fight and fight for country and glory
Run, and meet the ground so stony

This was one I wrote for inspiration in my story "The Unreal Fantasy"
Model it in this kind of format, short sentance structure, you should make a few sentences rhyme with each other, but they don't all have too. Try to model to this one

i cant tell a lie its a awesome poem but thats my first one and it was in my dream so i thought it was good

by the way awesome poem

thanks, and a dream poem is good because not many people can remember stuff like that in their dreams